Monday, June 28, 2010


I penned these mighty rage
Unleashed feisty a wrath long I cage

I smile at the agony
Chuckles at the Irony

Obese be my words
Weighed down by my hatred

If I could ever find ways to forgiveness
Trust me rather I lost to utter darkness



iNsOmNiAc said...

simply breathtaking...

Raizzèn said...

U think so ? :D

I thought it was pretty mediocre bordering on crap. But thanx.

I really need to start writing again.

iNsOmNiAc said...

honestly, i'm easily intrigued by anger & resentment ;p
and i like the way you put yours into words - simple but strong, it's almost point-blank.
if u were to be lost in the darkness, trust me, i'd be more than happy to be a companion ;) hahax!